Blog No.47: Rough cut feedback

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Sorry for not posting this yesterday, we had to upload our rough cut to Youtube, post the video on Blogger and then talk about the feedback. Both the teachers and students commented on the rough cut; what they like about it and what they think we can improve on.


Pros
  • Stylized from start to finish.
  • The editing has a coherent style.
  • Editing is matched to the song.
  • Flashing different colours.
  • Amazing silhouettes and brilliant experimental editing.
Cons
  • Don't use existing images from Google-copyright.
  • Lack of lyric animation.
  • Narrative is too obvious.
  • Need a trumpet instead of a French horn.
Improvements
  • Narrative needs to match.
  • Concentrate on the narrative.
  • Use kinetic typography.
  • Titles can be developed more.




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